The poster seems to be all done, but if I can improve on anything please share your opinion :^)
Some updates of the poster. The character is painted and now it’s the background, the product and bugs.My poster is heavily inspired by vintage poster for food. Where the kid looks extremely happy and exited to eat the product. Here I went for the same feeling but with the twist in the animation, that is the forced smile at the end.
Hi Adele, the poster really looks amazing! I feel like the design you have now can work really well for your TVC, but I would recommend you to center the product a little bit more because right now it’s really close to the side. I think it would be nice to let it be the focal point in the center a bit more just like the reference you gathered. 🙂
Hi Adele!
Nice poster, I like it.
I feel like the blues will just blend in as they are similar color.
Maybe you could try varieties of color and I get it that you are trying to achieve olden day poster.
I recommend you to look at this, https://www.behance.net/gallery/60762717/Neck-Deep-Gig-Posters
You have to sign up to look through for more, it’s free and useful!
Hope this helps you out a lot! All the best with your works! 😀
Hi Abel.
I love your poster design. The references you used clearly show what you are trying to achieve with your film and it looks amazing. I also get that vintage, 50s- 60s ish vibe which I can also feel in your animation despite it being in the future. I can also see it fit well with the dystopian feel of your story. Keep up the good work. I cant wait to see more!
Hey there! I love the colours you have gone for! I appreciate the contrast between the warm and cool colours. I also love that some of the bugs are pretty blurry as well. I think the colours have really tied in the theme of your whole poster. All the best!
Yumeat 
Hi Adele, the poster really looks amazing! I feel like the design you have now can work really well for your TVC, but I would recommend you to center the product a little bit more because right now it’s really close to the side. I think it would be nice to let it be the focal point in the center a bit more just like the reference you gathered. 🙂
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Hello Brandon, thank you for your comment, I agree it’s a good idea to put the product more in the center. Thanks again :^)
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Hi Adele!
Nice poster, I like it.
I feel like the blues will just blend in as they are similar color.
Maybe you could try varieties of color and I get it that you are trying to achieve olden day poster.
I recommend you to look at this,
https://www.behance.net/gallery/60762717/Neck-Deep-Gig-Posters
You have to sign up to look through for more, it’s free and useful!
Hope this helps you out a lot! All the best with your works! 😀
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Thank you so much Adilla! There are very nice inspiration thanks a lot :^D
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Hi Abel.
I love your poster design. The references you used clearly show what you are trying to achieve with your film and it looks amazing. I also get that vintage, 50s- 60s ish vibe which I can also feel in your animation despite it being in the future. I can also see it fit well with the dystopian feel of your story. Keep up the good work. I cant wait to see more!
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thank you so much Sarah! ♥
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Hey there! I love the colours you have gone for! I appreciate the contrast between the warm and cool colours. I also love that some of the bugs are pretty blurry as well. I think the colours have really tied in the theme of your whole poster. All the best!
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thank you so much faith!
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